Editing

I can already see some paragraphs I really want to edit!
So notes to self:

• Start editing first chapter
• Fix awkward monologue speech after the dream and see if I like it better
• Hold off ordering proof until some edits have been made or at least until votes are in!

I think I've waited long enough, stepped away from it, that I can go back with fresh perspective.
If I don't LOVE it, then publishers won't either!